A Concord Pastor Comments: Haiku

Friday, January 28, 2011

I saw it online
I just couldn't resist it
More snow this weekend

Philomena Ewing said...: Got me looking now
No stone unturned by digging
Stay inside Keep warm; January 29, 2011 4:30 AM
anne said...: Cold weather snow deep
Lifting shovel aching back
Tropical Island; January 29, 2011 8:52 AM
remaining nameless said...: pretty clever sir
thank you for not resisting
this month is soon done; January 29, 2011 5:42 PM
Austin Fleming said...: I'm happy that this combox has so many poets!; January 29, 2011 6:57 PM
little child said...: my mind is searching
I am thinking in haiku
everything is like a poem; January 29, 2011 7:45 PM
not so anonymous said...: I am like winter
with emotions numb and dark
praying for true peace

but God is with me
He warms me and gives me hope
promising me His love; January 29, 2011 9:48 PM
not so anonymous said...: oops-- just saw my mistake in my second haiku-- one too many syllables!

maybe this: promising me love

(but I like my original line better, even though it is not correct); January 29, 2011 10:11 PM